Gesture Drawing Critique - Am I on the right track?

Hi. I did a 30 minute practice session. 

https://imgur.com/a/BnXIU6t


I am new to this website, started this week. This is my 4th attempt at gesture practice (30 minutes class session). I am using A4 printer paper and a 0.5 fineliner pen.

Your gesture drawing looks good, but your detailed drawing needs a little work. Remember to keep proportions in mind, I know it can be difficult when copying a photo, but I would say you're on the right track, just keep practicing and making small adjustments in how you draw and you'll contineu to progress!

hi! It’s clear you’re not afraid to draw (your lines aren’t broken or jagged), but try to always draw the legs and arms even during warm-ups that last just 30 seconds. In general, I recommend starting by observing and analyzing the pose for 15–30 seconds (looking for negative space) and then beginning to draw it. Allow yourself to draw the pose for 2 minutes rather than 30 seconds (this is super hard and few people do it well), so that you aren’t rushing through the drawing but can calmly express yourself. More drawings like these 1-minute ones and it’ll be great. Best regards