Astheori的論壇貼

You see through me. I absolutely still struggle with foreshortening. 'Line overlapping to convey the anterior-posterior spatial relationships of forms and muscle groups' is such a good way to explain it. I think it light a blub on my head. Leg muscles is such a hellscape, so many muscles that overlap each other. I learn some, but put them on drawing is so hard. But now I know where I should practice more!

Legs anatomy, simplification and foreshortening.

Thank you so much for the tips and feedback :)

-> I found this website years ago, but only make account now. Receive feedback for my practice drawing feels more enlightening than I expect. Thank you for spending time to give critiques.

Now after you said that I realize I tend to focus on specific outline instead of overall picture.

As you can see on some of my drawing I try to use line of action but instead of following it, I end up drawing on another direction🥲 It always confuse me where actually line of action land on, so I use it just as motion line -- just for feeling. So it's a spine line!? That makes so much sense. But where on legs it should land? The most curved leg or on leg that carries the body weight?

I'll practice more on simplification! Thank you so much for the feedback!

After stop drawing for years, I start to drawing again! :)

My hand so stiff and I realize my fundamental is so lacking. So I start gesture drawing and learn a bit of anatomy several months ago:
https://imgur.com/a/8tTVNEz

Progress several weeks ago (please ignore the notes):
https://imgur.com/a/J6JUtIT

Recent drawing:
https://imgur.com/a/B2cuya3

I think I start to get the hang of it, but the problem is, I work extremely slow! The first drawing I need 7-15 min per figure. The second and last image, I need 20-30 min per figure. I just can't keep it short. I need some tips. And please criticize my drawing, what I can do to make it better? What do you think lacking from it? Need some feedback. Thank you!