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© 2019 Emmamora
               Hi everyone! My name is Emma and I'm new to the line of action community! Please let me know what you think of my first session here! I'd love any pointers!
Done as part of a 1 hour class. 
My current goal is: Fluidity, volume, action!
          
        
          
          Tsoomoo010
                        
    
    
      Looks amazing to me :D
    
    
    
    
      
                        
            
          
          samorexic
                        
    
    
    
      It looks good! but ankle/foot broken and flat in my eyes, unsure about the foot behind, do you draw thrugh??? imo you contor line is too strong and give it a very stiff look, almost like stone especially thighs maybe focus on the shadows and using more x contors to show volume. are you using a stomper or fingers to smudge your shading? you are sloppy on shading that cast shadow is ruining your beatiful figure. hope you the best
    
    
    
    
      
                        
            
          
          Emmamora
                        
    
    
    
      amazing critique! Thanks!
    
    
    
    
      




