10 Feb 8 minute sketch
© 2019 Saburton33
               any Suggestions on how I could have done better in this drawing? Many thank
          
        
          
          Ms Talkin
                        
    
    
      Your proportions look good, and your attention to detail is fairly consistant throughout. You appear to have struggled with the head and foreshortened arm, and they ended up emphasized. Try to keep your lines delicate until you are confident of the pose or detail, then bring in your emphasis.
    
    
    
    
      
                        
            
          
          Saburton33
                        
    
    
    
      Thank you so much, that is very helpful I will be sure to keep this in mind!
    
    
    
    
      




