Maybe practice structure. And draw couple skeletons. If the foundation is solid its hard to stretch out of porpotion.
Ooh, I really like your hatching, it's very neat! A few differences I see between your art and the model are:
1. The model's abdomen in your drawing is quite wide, especially in his pecs and shoulders, before tapering to a much narrower waist. To make this more proportionally accurate, it could help to roughly measure his torso width using the width of the head as a unit.
2. In your drawing, the figure's nipples are about level with each other, whereas in the reference, his left nipple is a bit higher than the right. Changing this would help show the contour of his chest and add more movement to the pose
I would recommend doing some shorter warmup sketches to help you get an impression of a model's proportions before going into detail with musculature, etc. Individual parts of his anatomy in your drawing look great (like his upper legs!! 🤯🤯🤯) and if each part works in proportion to the others, it will look even better!
Ooh, I really like your hatching, it's very neat! A few differences I see between your art and the model are:
1. The model's abdomen in your drawing is quite wide, especially in his pecs and shoulders, before tapering to a much narrower waist. To make this more proportionally accurate, it could help to roughly measure his torso width using the width of the head as a unit.
2. In your drawing, the figure's nipples are about level with each other, whereas in the reference, his left nipple is a bit higher than the right. Changing this would help show the contour of his chest and add more movement to the pose
I would recommend doing some shorter warmup sketches to help you get an impression of a model's proportions before going into detail with musculature, etc. Individual parts of his anatomy in your drawing look great (like his upper legs!! 🤯🤯🤯) and if each part works in proportion to the others, it will look even better!
i think the places u shaded look really good! something i noticed is that it seems the pelvis is angled differently from the model. its difficult to see bc of his undies, but the pose suggests the midline of the pelvis would be leaning more to the left. not sure if what u meant by small is lacking in volume or too narrow, but i suggest focus on the volume. other than that i do love how u defined the muscle groups in the body.
