Forumberichten van mizaelc

I can't make the image appear immediately.
Here's the link
https://www.dropbox.com/s/3qvufiqrv6duo0b/SCAN_2017-06-06_LineOfAction.JPG

Hi everyone,
Please give any critique you may have for this quick sketch.
Thanks!

Nice drawing..!
My critique is to point that the mouth looks too long for this perspective.
Don't you think there also seems to be a bump in the neck's back?
Mizael C.

Hi Red7Lotus,
Thanks a lot for your advice.
I made this based on a photo.
Mizael C.

Not a 30 seconds drawing, but one made on a couple of minutes.
Thanks for any critique.

Hi there,
This is my very first 30 seconds drawing, something of a self portrait drawing.
Please give any feedback you want to me.
Thank you,
Mizael C.