Messages du forum par JO NI

Been focusing on adding form to my gestures. Any suggestions to improve and change? All critique is welcomed.

Also, tell me if there is any problems with the link. Thank you. 

https://line-of-action.com/gallery/361822

I'm not sure what is going on with Imgur, but I have been getting "requested page could not be found" message from other users. Is there anyone having the same issue?

Is there any other places for me to upload images and get critique?

I see. Here is a new link. See if that works. Not sure what happened.

https://imgur.com/a/7dWEaTX

Okay. The problem is still there. Not sure why it keeps doing that.

https://imgur.com/a/mUZFhdk

Playing around adding form to my figures. Been learning Mike Mattesi's FORCE theories and I'm in Ch. 2 where he teaches about form or "sculpting". Anything to add? 

All critique is welcome.

Thanks for the feedback! I agree that I need to focus on perspective and solid forms. Is there any resources or books that you recommend?
Also, if you don't mind, can you be more detailed on what makes my perspective wonky?

All critique is welcomed

https://imgur.com/a/iL9Z7Tx

Thanks for all the responses (so far), this has been helpful!

Hey, I have realized I don't spend much time on faces. This is my progress so far. Any comments and critique is welcomed.

https://imgur.com/a/0LAXmaa

Good point. For specifics, I would say hips and torso is a start since I draw those first. Any thoughts of hips and torso and what I can improve?

Also, I really appreciate the critiques.

Hey, I want to hear your thoughts on this sketch I recently drew. The second (bottom) image is mirrored to see mistakes and I am aware what I need to work on. But I want to hear your thoughts.

Critique of ALL levels experience of art is welcomed. I did another post recently (https://line-of-action.com/forums/topic/foreshortening-practice) and there was still no critique. Am I doing anything wrong?

https://imgur.com/a/06QXXZU

It's been a while since I posted a critique. Did two 30 minute sessions, critique is very much welcomed! Also, the references were Free set #2, since I struggle with that angle.

https://imgur.com/a/RAxEqqC

I'm interested in Poses that are foreshortened. Been doing perspective as a daily study and fun activity. Been playing my gestures in boxes that are foreshortened. They look goofy, but I'm having fun with it. I might even show some samples, it's been a while. Also, having an option to choose foreshortened references only.

Besides Line-of-Action, are there any other places that I can get critique and advice for my work?

Personally, I find any noise pretty distracting. I tend to think more clearly.

Thanks for all the insights, it has been very eye opening.