Still life fruits Not too happy with this , help!
© 2021 Aleem80
               Done as part of a practice session with poses. 
My current goal is: Improve my shading and rendering of light
          
        
                        
            
          
          Ori  Concept Arts
                        
    
    
    
      It seems like a nice painting ,  Maybe needs more bounce light  off the white surface.  Have fun with it. why you are not happy with it?..
    
    
    
    
      





The proportions look natural and the colours are amazing. Well done!
In my opinion try using harder lines. Harsher light spots and shadows, so it doesn't look too soft or incomplete. It just needs that final touch.
Overall outstanding practice!