Daily practice, 35 min
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Peachyalex
I really like the way you emphasized form in the figure drawing and the figure itself looks fairly proportional. I would personally look into working more on your tone/value to make the drawing feel more 3D where shadows would be more dark. If anything, keep up the good work! :D
Mallou
@Peachyalex thank you so much for the feedback! Value is definitely a major weak point for me, I keep bouncing back and forth between too dark and too light. Going to finally stop being lazy and add 5-value scales to my practice routine, thanks for the nudge!
Alperensozen
Lovely work. I think you should consider relaxing about the values. The most unique thing I realised is that you tend to work more geometrically rather then plain-lines. This is a fair start and a major talent because not many can work close to shapes. Values will get better in time. The transition from sketch to actual figure seems wonderful. I am a newbie but these are my opinions. Good work!
