Forum posts by Etienne Unloq

Hi,

I have just seen your message. Thanks a lot !

Actually, I worked hard on force method by Mine Matesi, I really love the result (I have been improving my gesture since that post). But I don't know the coil method you are talking about.

I don't like the boxes method, it feel so stiff to me that I prefer use the flow of rhythm. 

See you !

Thanks a lot. I watched a lot proko months ago but I should resee it again.

Hi everyone,

I worked on gesture then added anatomy and finished with inking. How can I improve the proportions between muscles, shading effect and quality strokes ?

Here is my drawings : https://www.instagram.com/p/DPG6nOniAW6/?igsh=MWVjbmk3YTVxMDd6dA==

Thanks a lot !

I have been working on anatomy and line of action. Can you critique my 5' drawings ?

Thank you a lot !

https://www.instagram.com/p/DN0Qq6a0FH2/?igsh=MTVyMWl4emNwOXgybw==

Great ! May you share your idea to tackle that block ? It can be useful for me as well :) (and many others too)

Hi,

Any feedbacks are welcome. Since my last post, I've been following yours advises and I´ve worked on line of action and anatomy (still missing legs in my study). Feel free to critique.

https://www.instagram.com/p/DNL9a8zoE3m/?igsh=MW1ucHV1MWk1M2ZhYw==

As a beginner, I'm not sure to be useful to you. I'm studying force drawing too and I think you are on the good path. Maybe work a little bit more on perspective (the lower leg of your last figure is odd). And your drawings looks blocked in something. As I'm struggling  in the same thing, I can't help you on that.

Anyway, I think your drawings are very nice and good-looking. Keep working on that way.

@aunt herbert, thank you very much for these advises.

I have been focusing on outlines only in order to avoid stiff figures. So, I will work now on 3D representation right now and check stiffiness latter.

Thank you again

Hi there,

I have been studying figure drawing for few months with a big focus about energy through drawings (actually a better way to talk about stiff figure...)

Anyway, may one of you critique my 3 minutes drawings ?

Thank you very much

https://www.instagram.com/p/DMnjq3AIPaBAtt2jkIn64QvG4v4FuOV7wF10UI0/?img_index=1&igsh=MXI2eXF5cGZsaDFxdA==