Forum posts by JO NI

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  • #31579
    This was very informative, thank you for time to exlpain my shortcomings. I do watch Proko's content but to have a structure class that focuses on foundation figures is immensely helpful.
    #31572
    Critique on rendering and anatomy. The books suggest had been useful. Any suggestions for more challenging activities to improve shortcomings, especially foreshortening?

    Edit: Fixing some techincal issues. For some reason, the link does not show all of my images in a single post. Not sure if anyone saw all of my drawings.

    https://imgur.com/rQDCBzT

    https://imgur.com/m6yEsLf
    • JO NI edited this post on May 11, 2024 5:06am.
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    • JO NI edited this post on May 12, 2024 7:13pm.
    #31543
    See if this works, this is my first time using Imgur. Sorry of the inconvience. I really appricated the technical help.

    https://imgur.com/a/GrAyrAX
    #31540
    I see, I'll fix it as soon as possible.
    • JO NI edited this post on May 7, 2024 2:47am.
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    • JO NI edited this post on May 7, 2024 3:24am.
    #31532
    Alriht, let me relinked. If that dosen't work, I'll used imgur. It did worked twice before, not sure what happend.

    https://twitter.com/JO_NI12/status/1787247202295042479



    https://twitter.com/JO_NI12
    • JO NI edited this post on May 6, 2024 5:04pm.
    • JO NI edited this post on May 6, 2024 5:05pm.
    #31530
    Working on Clairfying/Story Telling. I added expressions to see if the gesture captures performance. Also, I want to improve my rendering. Any tips and sugesstions? Resources? 10 minutes drawings really helped, should I study longer?

    https://twitter.com/JO_NI12/status/1787247202295042479
    #31522
    Thanks for the critique. As for the texts you mentioned, I have already have purchased the books and they have been a wealth of examples and tips. I will do more 10+ minutes of drawings.
    #31515
    I want to work on clarifying/Expressing my gestures. Any suggstions and examples? Also how are my lines, shapes, and forms? What else can I improve on such as story telling?


    https://twitter.com/JO_NI12/status/1786284861751443831
    • JO NI edited this post on May 3, 2024 6:50am.
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    • JO NI edited this post on May 3, 2024 6:18pm.
    #31509
    Thank for your feedback, very insightful. Any examples of expression the forms of my gestures? Also an another example of "Loose but Tightned" forces and forms? I can do 2 ten minte poses but some examples or books would be appreciated.
    • JO NI edited this post on May 2, 2024 3:38pm.
    #31504
    Just made an account today. All Critiques are welcomed. (Note: Using Twitter for images only)

    https://twitter.com/JO_NI12/status/1785867678764413409
    • JO NI edited this post on May 2, 2024 3:06am.
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    • JO NI edited this post on May 2, 2024 5:33am.