Your work is very fluid and dynamic. Especially the first 3 pages, the poses are very readable. The last two more finished poses I find to be less believable, and the perspective feels a little wonky. I think it would be beneficial to focus on creating more solid forms with perspective, because your gestures are so good.
Thanks for the feedback! I agree that I need to focus on perspective and solid forms. Is there any resources or books that you recommend?
Also, if you don't mind, can you be more detailed on what makes my perspective wonky?
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JO NI
edited this post on June 24, 2025 12:00pm.
Reason: Adding more details
I love how you're building your forms, you have a great understanding of dynamic movement and the volume of the body. When incorporating perspective you might want to give a bit more attention to the skeletal structure and proportions of that structure within your planes. Then build the mass of the body on top of that. Really gorgeous gestures though, I love how you use your line. Very expressive. I can't wait to see more of your work, you're clearly very talented.
