5' gesture critique

I have been working on anatomy and line of action. Can you critique my 5' drawings ?

Thank you a lot !

https://www.instagram.com/p/DN0Qq6a0FH2/?igsh=MTVyMWl4emNwOXgybw==

hi etienne!

i really like the defined curves in your sketches here, i think the bottom right is my favorite one :) something about how you draw curves in that sketch really makes the torso feel real and fluid!!

it appears you are using the coil method to figure out foreshortening, which i think is a good approach! if you dont feel super confident in that may i also suggest using boxes? 

for me personally i found cubes to be more 'objective' when it comes to perspective since circular objects can be a bit more free form. it helped me personally, so maybe that can help you on your perspective journey!

Hi,

I have just seen your message. Thanks a lot !

Actually, I worked hard on force method by Mine Matesi, I really love the result (I have been improving my gesture since that post). But I don't know the coil method you are talking about.

I don't like the boxes method, it feel so stiff to me that I prefer use the flow of rhythm. 

See you !