Hi! You are doing awesome so far! I think the movement of image 13 is very nice. I think what you should work on is drawing through your forms a little more. When you draw through instead of adding lines to indicate the outside of the body, it helps give the drawing more depth and feel less flat. Focus more on the shapes of the body, rather than lines. If you enjoy reading, I recommend checking out "Figure Drawing Design and Invention" by Michael Hampton! It's a great book teaching about gesture, drawing through the form with simple shapes and helping to simplify anatomy!
