First critique

Hello everyone, just signed up and am going to commit to improving my art and making a go of getting to the point of character illustration/comic/manga art with possible commissions. This is a WIP of my OC Yuriko Ishikawa, a Kamakura-era merchant's daughter in a fantasy Japan analogue. This is digital art done with Krita on my Wacom One pen display Always open to constructive criticism.

https://cara.app/post/4499baa2-74e5-4d6d-b85c-7452cf344e3a