Critique on my progression

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August 8, 2025 1:28pm #39725
JO NI

I'm on Ch. 2 on Mike Mattesi's FORCE. Been adding form to my figures and doing a "Blind Force" drawings.

These are my recent drawings. But, my gallery is also opened to critique. Here is also a link to a discussion that had not gotten feedback yet.

https://line-of-action.com/forums/topic/critique-on-recent-drawings

Any concepts and ideas that I am misunderstanding? All feedback is welcomed.

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- JO NI edited this post on August 8, 2025 1:39pm.
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August 10, 2025 4:13pm #39726

Etienne Unloq

As a beginner, I'm not sure to be useful to you. I'm studying force drawing too and I think you are on the good path. Maybe work a little bit more on perspective (the lower leg of your last figure is odd). And your drawings looks blocked in something. As I'm struggling in the same thing, I can't help you on that.

Anyway, I think your drawings are very nice and good-looking. Keep working on that way.

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