A couple of poses

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  • #40179
    Hello! I’m newer to the site and this is my first time asking for critique!

    How am I generally doing? What would you suggest focusing on? Thank you for any and all help!  Have the most amazing day!  Critique
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    #40181
    Nicely done. Your linework describes the shapes beautifully (particularly the 2nd and 3rd images). You did a great job of capturing the twisting forms in the 3rd - the feet are great (feet can be hard). 

    I do think the heads  in both of those figures seem the wrong proportion to the bodies - they appear to be on the small side. There’s something that seems off about the back knee in the 3rd - looks like a side view of the knee, but the foot is facing more forward. It’s hard to say for sure without seeing the sources.
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    • Sdzsmith edited this post on January 23, 2026 10:07pm.
    #40183
    Nice how you captured feet and lower legs. May be the twist in relation upper body to hips could have a bit more curvy lines. But wonderful overall capturing, looking foreward to see further posts from you.
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    #40188
    Thank you so much for taking the time to critique! I’ll look into my proportions more. Thanks again.
    #40191
    Great work!.
    Nice shape designe I would only say that the first one has many messy lines but overall great work!
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